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If your parent was in the armed services, or if you are a parent serving in any branch of the military for any country, please go to http://tr.im/gA79 and answer a few questions. Thank you for your help.

Author Davis Aujourd'hui on Today's Podcast

New Author Davis Aujourd'hui Offers Social Commentary Through a Hilarious Hard-Drinking, Chain Smoking Nun

Davis Aujourd'hui will be joining Sarah Moore on the podcast today to discuss his book The Misadventures of Sister Mary Olga Fortitude. Sister Mary Olga offers her honest perspective on the residents of Bucksnort, Wisconsin, many of whom are revealed to have quite colorful personalities. Readers will meet characters who present a false pretense of perfection to the outside world but who actually have their own ridiculous flaws, as well as men and women who have spent their entire lives on the fringes of traditional society. In all instances, Sister Mary Olga teaches us to be tolerant of differences and to treat everyone with love.


Click here to listen to the interview with Davis Aujourd’hui ...

In the interview, Mr. Aujourd'hui will share how he developed some the memorable characters included in his book, the impact that his personal background has on the lessons of the novel, and what kind of adventures we can expect next from Sister Mary Olga.

To purchase The Misadventures of Sister Mary Olga Fortitude, please go here.

Check out the author's website here.

Information on Writing, Editing, Publishing, & Book Marketing

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Author Jennifer Chase Discusses Her New Thriller Compulsion

Today we welcome Jennifer Chase, author of the new thriller Compulsion, to our writing blog. She shares a discussion about her book with Sarah Moore, Author’s Assistant for Writers in the Sky.

SARAH: Tell me something about yourself and your writing background.

JENNIFER CHASE: I’ve enjoyed writing for as long as I can remember. Ever since I was old enough, I read everything I could get my hands on. I love everything about books and dreamed what it would be like to be a published author someday, surrounding myself with even more books. When I was young, I would write short stories and I imagined what it would be like to be Nancy Drew solving mystery cases. When I became an adult, I still loved to write, but found that my life was filled with work and day-to-day activities in the business management world.

I have an intense curiosity about crime and the varied connections between the actual crime and the criminal mind. I decided to go back to school and I earned a Bachelor degree in police forensics in 2003 and I just received my Masters in criminology in 2008. My academic background has helped prepare me to write in the thriller and true crime genres. Everything in my life seems to point directly back at writing, so that’s when I decided it was time to complete my first novel.

SARAH: Share the premise and general plot of Compulsion so that we will know the genre and storyline of your book.

JENNIFER: Compulsion is a suspense thriller novel about a woman named Emily Stone, who tracks down child serial killers on the West coast. She uses her police background and natural ability to get inside the criminal mind in order to gather detailed, on-the-scene evidence. In doing so, she stealthily tracks down the most deplorable pedophiles and serial killers. Then, she anonymously sends her information to the police detective in charge of the case, and another monster is swiftly taken off the streets. Her secret identity is imperative not only for her protection, but to ensure that her hunt will continue uninterrupted. But, when two brazen serial killers are terrorizing women right in Emily’s hometown, she gets too close to the action. She becomes the hunted and must rely on help from a handsome local police detective.

Compulsion probes the minds of two serial killers known only as “The Killer” and “The Accomplice,” which sets the tone for the dangerous cat and mouse game. There’s action, suspense, and CSI techniques used to track down these two killers with a few surprises along the way.

SARAH: What inspired you to write this book?

JENNIFER: My favorite genre has always been suspense, mystery, and thriller books. My inspiration for Compulsion is really three-fold. First, my love for writing and wanting to complete a thriller novel has been the main driving force. Second, my academic background actually gave me the confidence to write about serial killers and related crime scene investigations. And finally, it was my first hand experience living next door to a psychopathic individual with violent tendencies that consistently threatened my life for more than two years, along with my interaction with local law enforcement. But, this bad experience gave me first-hand research and a great jumping off point to begin planning the characters for my book. It was a horrible experience that ultimately turned out to be a great experience.

SARAH: How long did it take to write this book? Any interesting tidbits you would like to share concerning your writing method or how the book developed?

JENNIFER CHASE: I have been thinking about this book for quite some time, so when it came time to outline my story it went rather quickly. One of the finishing touches to my story was when I discovered how many children are reported missing each year (approximately 800,000). That information propelled the storyline for Emily Stone to hunt down child serial killers.

I spent two months completing an extensive outline of my story—it was approximately 100 pages. I weave every plot component that I possibly can to make sure that my story flows properly. With an extensive outline, I’m able to spot things that I normally might not see with the finished drafts. This absolutely eliminates countless rewrites, which is time consuming and frustrating. Once my outline is completed, I let it sit on the shelf for at least a month and work on something else. The actual chapter writing and the bulk of the story took approximately two months for a 300-plus page book. Editing the book then took an additional four to six weeks from an experienced editor. I usually read my entire story aloud to make sure that it flows properly and to find any minor mistakes. Ideally, I should let the manuscript sit for another month and take another critical look, but I was extremely excited to submit my final project.

First Draft in 30 Days by Karen S. Wiesner was extremely helpful to me for planning my book projects and helped to spur on the writing. I highly recommend this book for any writer that wants to incorporate a writing schedule and any other type of marketing plan for a book project.

SARAH: How did you publish your book? Tell me about your publishing experience and what you learned from it.

JENNIFER: I felt that it was possible to publish this book through mainstream publishing houses, but I simply just didn’t want to wait for the long process and there are still no guarantees. I decided to look at other alternatives and what they had to offer. There are several types of self-publishing houses out there and I studied each one. I decided on Outskirts Press. It allows you complete control over your book, from pricing to marketing. I was impressed by the caliber of books they publish and the consistent overall quality. It was a great process for me, but you have many decisions to make. Sometimes it was a bit overwhelming, but the representative assigned to you makes it a breeze. Overall, I feel that they packaged a great product. I was impressed with the cover design and overall look of the book. And once the project is over, it doesn’t stop there. Outskirts will continue to answer any questions after publishing and assist with marketing ideas.

I would suggest for anyone who wants to self-publish to study the different avenues and make a decision based on what you really want for your project. It is also extremely important to have an editor review the manuscript and a professional graphic designer to create the cover and back blurb.

For more information on Outskirts Press go to http://www.outskirtspress.com

SARAH: Did you work with an agent? If so, how did you find the agent? Was it beneficial to you?

JENNIFER: I don’t have an agent. However, I do plan on contacting an agent after my second book project is completed.

SARAH: Where is your book available? Do you have a Web site or blog where we can learn more about you or your book?

JENNIFER: Compulsion is available on Amazon, Barnes and Noble, Target, and other Internet book retailers. You can have any local bookstore order a copy as well. You can also order Compulsion in an e-Book or Amazon Kindle format.

I welcome any questions or comments about my book. You can learn more information about my novel Compulsion at www.outskirtspress.com/compulsion.

SARAH: As far as marketing, do you do more online publicity or print/radio/TV promotion? Tell me some ways you have promoted your book. Give examples and links to any sites you feel might help other authors.

JENNIFER: After my book was published, it was extremely exciting but overwhelming at the same time. I wasn’t sure where to start or the best avenues to begin this long marketing journey. I’ve been marketing my book online, through book reviews, on radio, and through various local promotions. I would suggest marketing locally as much as you can to begin to build a fan base and expand. I feel that it’s important to network with other self-published authors in the same genre as well.

There are a few sites that I would suggest for new authors that have been helpful to me.

http://www.bookpleasures.com
http://www.bookreviews.com
http://www.amazon.com
http://www.writersinthesky.com
http://www.goodreads.com

As far as marketing goes, Amazon is a great place to promote your book. There are many ways to market your book on their website. I found that the book Sell Your Book on Amazon by Brent Sampson is a great reference and I highly recommend it.

SARAH: Have you hired a publicist to help promote this book? If so, what was your experience like?

JENNIFER: I have not hired a publicist, but I’m looking into the possibility.

SARAH: Do you have any future writing projects in the works? Please tell us a bit about what we can expect next!

JENNIFER: I’m in the process of working on the extensive outline for my second thriller novel with Emily Stone as she tracks down an ingenious high-tech serial killer who uses the front of a prominent video game company to elicit unsuspecting victims. It will have even more excitement with some new and old characters. I hope to finish this project by the end of the year. Also, I’m beginning to research a group of unsolved serial homicides in California during the early 1980s for a potential true crime book.

SARAH: Any other comments you would like to share about your new novel, Compulsion?

JENNIFER: I really tried to write a thriller with a fresh new perspective on serial killers and I hope that all thriller lovers out there will enjoy Compulsion.

SARAH: Thank you for giving us the opportunity to get to know you and learn about your book. I wish you well in your journey as an author.

JENNIFER: Thank you.
For more information, please visit http://authorjenniferchase.blogspot.com/

Poetry Corner February 2009!

Working the Room

Champagne glasses clink together,
Laughter fills the evening air,
Music set its subtle mood as
Fashion flashes everywhere.
In the middle of it all
You begin to weave your loom,
And I can only stand in awe
To watch you work the room.

There’s a sparkle in your eye
Meant for all the world to know,
Captured from a midnight sky,
Projected in its afterglow.
Lifting up your audience
Far beyond the waning moon,
Magic follows everywhere as you’re
Working the room.

Others try to steal your spotlight,
But they can’t compete.
They just fade into the background,
Left to worship at your feet.

You are every roving star
Filling up the nighttime sky,
Flaunting wings of fantasy;
Never mind the reason why.
Finding favor everywhere to
Chase away the gloom.
There’s a celebration as you’re
Working the room.

~ Dennis S Martin
http://www.iwritesome.com
http://iwritesome.blogspot.com/

SCARS

There’s a little red spot on my left breast.
Where the biopsy needle went in.
There’s a long purple smile beside it,
Where the surgeon pulled back the skin.
And she scraped all the bad ole stuff right out.
I put my pants back on, and I went home with my doubts.
Did I take one hormone too many?
Should I have drunk more red wine?
Did I smoke too many cigarettes?
Which of these risks was mine?
I was number eight out of ten,
On the clinic dry erase board that day.
We all put our pants back on.
We all went home to wait.

And we all have scars no one else can see.
From pain we don’t want to remember.
They make us move in different ways,
Leave places that are tender.

My Ex signed by all the Xs on the paper.
His lawyer shoved the pen at me.
A judge can sign off on all this stuff.
But I know I’ll never be free.
Somewhere we lost the real-deal love.
I went home, all by myself, and asked the stars above.
Should I have given him a baby?
Would he have stayed home a little more?
Why did he have to correct my grammar?
Why did I scream when he walked out the door?
We were the third divorce case,
In his lawyer’s office that day.
We all put our coats back on.
And went our separate ways.

And we all have scars no one else can see.
From pain we don’t want to remember.
They make us move in different ways,
Leave places that are tender.

~ Jan Bossing © Joelton, TN 2007

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
You Are Like the Light

You walked along the wrong path
For a very long time,
You stopped when you knew
You had crossed the line.

It took something very wrong
To make something very right,
Before you were in darkness
And now you're in the light.

You learned bad experiences
You almost lived in hell,
You learned possibilities
You were saved by the bell.

The "virus" I call the bell
Because it opened up your soul,
Before the world was over you
But now you're in control.

This time God really barked
He barked, but didn't bite,
It just scared you enough
To make you want to fight.

In your old path of life
You refused your way out,
But now you finally realized
What life is really about.

When you discovered your disease
You thought you were said and done,
Not realizing at all
Your life had just begun.

Now you're on the road
Now you must keep on living,
Testify your experiences
And heal by giving.

Enjoy your living life
Let go of all your fears,
Remember all the laughter
And forget about the tears.

Life can be very long
It can also be short,
Just have proof of innocence
When you reach heavens court.

Oh sister, you're in my heart
And this poem I had to write,
Before you were in darkness
But now you're in the light

I love you! I can't wait to see you again!
I miss you! But until then......

Written By Iris Erielle Foss for sister Maria before she died of AIDS

A Self

A Self
Is Found
In Each Belief
In Each Moment
In Each Experience

A Self
Is Energy
Completely Aglow
Fueled
By The Match
Of Consciousness

Burning At Different Intensities
The Flame
Of Each Self
Becomes A Candle
Within The Framework
Of Spontaneous Selves

The Self
Is A Reflection
Of Becoming
In The Awareness
Of The Wick
The Wax
The Candle
And The Light

From the 2008 Collection of Spirit Songs by Hal Manogue poet and author of Short Sleeves Insights and Short Sleeves A Book For Friends http://halmanogue.blogspot.com/

I Can Do It, Lord

I can be who you want me to be!
I need practice every day for the rest of my life,
But I know now that I can respond to you as you wish.
Please be merciful and kind to me.
Pay special attention to the ways I learn best and
Teach me according to my mind set.
Be as gentle as possible, I ask.

As for me, I bravely set myself to practice the lessons
You give me from day to day.

My testimony is:
The Lord and I are working together.
We have lots on our minds…much work to do
(work in my inner person, testimony to give others,
fruits of the Holy Spirit to bring forth,
many good works to accomplish).

I remain your faithful and loyal servant.
What's my next assignment?

~ Dianne Hansen, Bipolar blog Enjoying Your Health : http://enjoyingyourhealth.com

Sky

Rain falls from the sky
down on to the white desert of satin,
from a dark hazel emotion
as the devil smiles away his sorrow
in seing his angel fly,
saying he was never afraid of anything,
except the part where he became a memory
blurred out of the sky.

See how many times I write sky?
Is because Heaven is inexistent,
and I cannot speak of that which I cannot pray
... and I cannot pray to the sands of satin...
not while the rain falls from the hazel-colored sky.

Nostalgic

If you saw me, desire me
Like the moon desires the sun's sighs,
Like the clouds desire the touch of the rain.
Beautiful as the sunset,
Beautiful as the night sky,
You are far away...

I can't have the luxury of having you
Because I cannot have the luxury of having a soul,
That misses you,
That wants you,
That tells me just how empty is my existence without you.

How little poetic we become,
When we turn all mushy and nostalgic!

Yuvia Chairez. Born, raised, and currently living in the border town of Juarez, Mexico. Writer, Veterinarian, and Teacher, she has been published in several cultural magazines in Mexico (Fronteras, Armario, Tierra Adentro), as well as several poetry anthology books from various authors ("Ciudad de Cierto, Rio", "Voces de la Frontera", "Memorias del Encuentro de Poetras" -- all of them from Doble Helice Editorial). As a writer, she has won the David Alfaro Siqueiros Award given by the Chihuahua Culture Institute with her short story book, "De la Luna y Otros Vicios" (From the Moon and Other Vices). She currently works as an ESL Teacher at the North Regional University (URN). Web page: deviantart.com

Author Davis Aujourd'hui Will Join the Podcast This Friday

To end our month of podcasts, we will offer an interview on February 27 with a new author whose first offering is both hilarious and a smart social commentary. Davis Aujourd'hui will be discussing The Misadventures of Sister Mary Olga Fortitude.



This novel, the first in a series, centers around a hard-drinking, chain smoking nun who shares the latest gossip on the colorful personalities in her town. As readers quickly learn, even those who portray an air of perfection have some ridiculous flaws. Through Sister Mary, we all learn about acceptance of others who live on the fringes of traditional society. Mr. Aujourd’hui will discuss the messages he tries to impart through Sister Mary and how they stem from lessons learned in his own life. Listeners also will learn what they can expect from the future books in the series.

Please check out Mr. Aujourd'hui's website here.

Purchase on Amazon.com

Title of Document: Book Review
Book Title: The Misadventures of Sister Mary Olga Fortitude
Author: Davis Aujourd’hui
ISBN Number: 978-1-4327-3047-5
Publisher: OutskirtsPress.com
Genre and Target Market: fiction; humor; social commentary
Publication Date: 2009
Book Length in Pages: 155

When I reflect on the fictional nuns who have found their way into our collective consciousness through television and movies over the last fifty years, there seems to be the common thread of a dichotomous personality. These pious women are portrayed as kind-hearted servants of God and their communities, but also mischievous humans who are quite capable of less-than-holy behavior. Maria from The Sound of Music cared about those VonTrapp children, but she was known to be late to afternoon prayers. Sally Field was charming as The Flying Nun, but her unorthodox methods often had the Reverend Mother up in arms. And, of course, Whoopi Goldberg used her habit to hide from the mob during her turn as a nun in Sister Act. Davis Aujourd’hui adds another Sister to the roll call of memorable nuns in his new book The Misadventures of Sister Mary Olga Fortitude. With her alcohol-filled crucifix and Marlboro smoke signals sent straight to heaven as prayers, this sister will undoubtedly captivate your attention and have you turning the pages.

Sister Mary Olga speaks to the readers directly, with each of the chapters reading like the script from a classic radio broadcast. I doubt that many of the nun’s stories would have passed FCC scrutiny, however! She draws us in with opening remarks which immediately command our attention, like “T.L.I.A.M.G, my dears!” (the acronym standing for The Lord is a Mighty God) or “Now!” Then, she proceeds to share important lessons in Advanced Holiness using some of the residents of Bucksnort, Wisconsin, home of the Have a Heart convent, as the fodder for her tales. Readers of Sister Mary Olga Fortitude’s wise and unique perspective will quickly learn that no one is without a fascinating story to his or her name. Although you may never have discovered a body in the process of cremation as you tried to bake a cake or bore offspring who made inappropriate digestive noises while playing Baby Jesus in the annual Christmas pageant, I know that you will be able to relate to the flaws discussed by Sister Mary, albeit exaggerated, that are common to the human condition. Mr. Aujourd’hui’s inspired storytelling and fun use of words make each of these revelations all the more memorable.

Even while creating a hilarious cast of characters and series of events in which they are players, Aujourd’hui presents his readers with a serious commentary on the importance of tolerance and refraining from judgment. Through Sister Mary Olga Fortitude, he introduces us to people who are often considered outcasts in traditionally accepted society, from transgendered nuns and prostitutes to gay cowboys and morbidly obese women. While sharing their stories and secrets, Sister reminds us not to be critical of the unusual personalities we meet as the book unfolds. And, as reinforcement, she repeatedly confesses to her own shortcomings in terms of lust, gossip, and alcohol. The Misadventures of Sister Mary Olga Fortitude is a laugh-out-loud interpretation of the Golden Rule.

To further the point of the dangers to be found in judgment and narrow-mindedness, Aujourd’hui creates a group of women who are known as the Bunheads United Now organization (BUN). These ladies are known for their tight pulled-back hairstyle, which Sister Mary Olga points out is a hindrance to unimpeded brain functions. They are critical of anyone who does not fit the acceptable mold of behavior and they create superficial, seemingly perfect demeanors to hide their most personal doubts and insecurities. The leader of the BUN brigade, appropriately named Priscilla Bunhead, ends up on the receiving end of some vengeful scissors. Readers who have felt judged for their lifestyle or decisions will likely take some satisfaction out of this particularly amusing moment in the book.

The Misadventures of Sister Mary Olga Fortitude is a new release by Davis Aujourd’hui that presents a sharp and irreverent look at humanity. Offered through the lens of an unforgettable nun who knows everybody’s business but refrains from placing judgments (well, most of the time!), this novel is wonderful in its personality development and colorful language. And, as is promised on the book jacket, I am thrilled that more “misadventures” await those who quickly will become loyal readers. I have no doubt that Sister Mary Olga Fortitude has many more secrets to share and life lessons to teach, and I plan to be sitting in the front row.

Discover The Copywriting Keys To Unleashing Your Social Media Marketing Success in 2009 & Beyond...

No matter what your business, no matter what product, service or expertise you are selling, you need the right words to sell. Of course, in this “Web 2.0” world, there are so many places and platforms that need relevant and persuasive words – blogs, press releases, Squidoo lenses, articles, newsletters and bios/profiles for Twitter, LinkedIn and Facebook, to name a few.

Many successful marketers will tell you that copywriting – the ability to put what you are selling into words that actually sell – is the #1 most important skill to have in marketing. And this is true now more than ever.

My colleagues Craig Cannings of VAClassroom and Allison Nazarian of Get It In Writing have teamed up to present an amazing (and did I mention FREE?) webinar event on this very topic. In the world of social media, and social marketing in particular, your credibility, your visibility and your reputation are the measures of your success. And the key to being able to shine in social media lies in the words businesses use to have the conversations they are having.

Craig and Allison – and I – invite you to take advantage of this session: Discover The Key Copywriting Techniques For Unleashing Your Social Media Marketing Success in 2009 & Beyond. This is an event you don’t want to miss – the “secret weapon” so many successful marketers have and use can (and should) be yours too.

Discover The Key Copywriting Techniques For Unleashing Your Social Media Marketing Success in 2009 & Beyond.

What: Free Webinar Event
When: Thursday March 5, 5pm Eastern (2pm Pacific)
Who: You! This free webinar event and the Special Report are perfect for Solopreneurs, Entrepreneurs, Small Business Owners, Coaches, Consultants, Freelancers, Copywriters, Virtual Assistants and Online Professionals.
Bonus: And when you sign up for this no-charge event, you will also receive Craig & Allison’s Special Report: Five Copywriting Strategies Guaranteed To Successfully Bring You, Your Brand & Your Business
Into The New Kingdom.
How: Registration Page: CopywritingKingdom

Copywriting Keys to Conquer the Social Media Kingdom

I just got word about a free (as in NO CHARGE!) webinar. Here are the details from Allison Nazarian.

As you know, I think copywriting is pretty important when it comes to selling. And I, like most of you, know that Social Media is the way of the future (and of the now for that matter) when it comes to marketing anything - yourself, your brand or your business.

So I am teaming up with Craig Cannings, a well-known very successful leader of social media, a trainer and e-learning expert (and many of you will also know him as Founder of VAClassroom.com) to present a free (as in NO CHARGE!) webinar event entitled:

"Discover the Copywriting Keys to Conquering the Social Media Kingdom."

There is tons (and tons and tons) of content that needs to be produced (by you or someone working on your behalf) regularly...articles, blog posts, press releases, twitter bios and tweets, other social media profiles, PDF e-books, Hubpages and Squidoo Lenses - and the list goes on.

Many businesses are seeing the great value in creating and mass distributing relevant web content to their target market(s) BUT they are lacking either copywriting skills or the social marketing savvy they must have to effectively bolster their business efforts.

In this webinar, we will discuss how you can use copywriting to leverage the power of social media and move your business exactly where you want it to be - in 2009 and beyond.

So, check out this five-minute video and sign up for the NO-CHARGE (as in free) webinar event: http://www.CopywritingKingdom.com.

Be sure to add your name and e-mail address to receive some great bonus content (you will also receive a Special Report entitled Five Copywriting Strategies Guaranteed To Successfully Bring You, Your Brand & Your Business Into The New Kingdom)

So take five minutes to visit and check out the video - and most importantly, to claim your spot for this webinar: http://www.CopywritingKingdom.com

(For quick reference, the free webinar "Discover the Copywriting Keys to Conquering the Social Media Kingdom" will take place on March 5, at 5 p.m. Eastern (2 p.m. PST)I look forward to connecting with you at the webinar in a couple weeks.

To Your Success,
Allison Nazarian

Author P.J. Thomas on Today's Podcast

Author of New Book My Name is Michael Exposes Terrifying Abuse of Children through Captivating Novel

Sarah Moore, author's assistant for Writers in the Sky, will be discussing the new release My Name is Michael with author P.J. Thomas. Thomas spent two years in China absorbing the culture and learning as much as he could about its people. He found a society that is deep in tradition and beauty but that is also home to a horrible practice. Young boys and girls from poor families in the countryside are kidnapped, purposefully deformed, and then put on the streets to beg. My Name is Michael is a fictional account of one boy who faces this hopeless situation.

Click here to listen to the entire interview

In today's interview, Thomas will discuss how he uncovered the truth behind this practice and how it is not limited to China. He also will share how he developed the characters for this novel and what listeners should do if they are moved by Michael's story. Listeners will have the opportunity to learn from Thomas' extensive time spent in China and the genuine concern that he has for the children of that country.

Please join us for this enlightening and sobering interview today.

Purchase My Name is Michael at Amazon.

The Number One Fastest Way to Become a Freelance Writer

By Andrea Mai (a student in Yvonne Perry’s newbie mentoring class)

If you are a beginning writer or looking to break into a new style of writing, the most effective way to learn new techniques is to find a mentor. With a goal to become an income-earning freelance writer before I hit forty, I knew I needed some help. After reviewing a variety of online programs, correspondence and local courses, I found what I was looking for. Using a teleseminar format, the class would meet once a week for one hour with assignments to be completed throughout the week.

My mentor, Yvonne Perry, has been a working writer for many years. I had the privilege of meeting her through a local writer’s group. Whenever I meet a person who has skills I want or need, or if they’ve accomplished a feat I can learn from, I try to keep an eye out for them online and in the media. I observed her online presence grow by leaps and bounds over the past two years and I knew she could show me the ropes. When she said she was starting a mentoring program my interest was piqued. But, would she teach skills I actually needed or just fluff? As I read the list of assignments we would cover I was reassured.

The beginning course covers basic skills a freelancer needs and at the end you will have a portfolio of press/media releases, articles for article marketing, book review, summary or back cover blurb, and biographical sketches. There are three levels of the mentoring program and in the intermediate class topics covered will include organizing material for ghostwriting a book, setting prices, conducting business, closing the deal, public relations, and collecting payment. At the advanced level, subjects covered include finding a niche, promoting your online business, social marketing, and so much more.

While these are skills that could be learned from a book and a great deal of practice, the learning curve is drastically reduced when you work with a professional to guide you. The opportunity to ask questions, dig deeper, and get feedback are critical to improving your writing and business proficiency.

Yvonne Perry is the owner of Writers in the Sky Writers Service. To find out more about her mentoring program visit Writers in the Sky Podcast and Blog.

In her transition to a full-time writing career, Andrea Mai built Creating Momentum, a blog filled with resources for writers and artist who are doing the work and living out their dreams. Visit today to find out more about writing programs and mentors as well as other lived and learned tips and motivation.

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Book with a View February 2009

My Name is Michael

Author: P. J. Thomas

ISBN: 978-1-4327-3306-3

Publisher: OutskirtsPress.com (2009)

Genre and Target Market: fiction; China; human rights

Pages: 56

Reviewed by Sarah Moore for WITS (01/2009)

Sometimes I find it difficult to review a book when its message is so powerful and its potential to have a lasting impact on everyone who reads its pages is of great consequence. Will I do justice to what is being conveyed? How can I effectively capture the feelings I had when reading the book and the way its characters still enter my thoughts? These concerns sat with me as I reflected on the new release My Name is Michael by P.J. Thomas. This short book of fifty-six pages tells the fictional story of a child beggar in China, but the personal research done by the author in learning about this forgotten segment of Chinese society is horrifically real. I am confident that you will, as I did, become gripped by this book and read it in one sitting. Then, you will want to pass the novel onto your friends so that you can have others with which to share a discussion about this unforgettable story.

Michael is a young boy in modern China who earned his beloved school name from an American teacher who tells the kids about the beauty and liberty in the United States. Tragically, in short time, Michael would be kidnapped and come to know a life which held no semblance of comfort or freedom. He is taken to the home of Mama Chang, who plays host to enslaved child beggars. Michael is quickly taken to The Butcher for procedures that, as graphically described, are revolting and provide physical results that make him a more sympathetic character to passersby. Despite these unimaginable circumstances, Michael never loses his ability to love, befriend, or place the needs of others above his own. My Name is Michael is an amazing testimony to the innocence and truth in children that endures in the face of the harshest abuse and dimmest future.

P.J. Thomas reminds us in the prologue that his book is a work of fiction, but he also acknowledges the reality in which his story is based. I must admit that I had no idea about the sinister practice of stealing children, disfiguring them, and then placing them on the streets to earn spare change. Luckily, though, the story of Michael and other boys like him has found a powerful voice. Thomas spent two years in China learning about its people and, when he took notice of the many children with deformed bodies, he managed to find a few people who were not terrified to share what they knew. The resulting book is a beautifully crafted piece of art. Each chapter heading, such as “A Cry for Help” and “Return to the Butcher” prepares us for another moment in which we will catch our breaths or become enraged. The use of stark words and phrases throughout the text creates a powerful image of emptiness. There is no room for flowery language in the world that Michael knows.

In addition to the power of his words, Thomas lays out the book in a way that captures and maintains a reader’s attention. Starting with the front cover sketch of a young boy who has lost both legs holding a bruised, abandoned baby, Thomas includes the occasional artwork to make his already stark images even more clear. By seeing the visual interpretation of The Butcher or Mama Chang’s face, the reader must face the concept of these unspeakably horrible people actually being human. Each chapter is also formatted to be short and feel almost abrupt. We are let into snapshots of Michael’s life and the reader gets whisked away after a few quick pages, effectively recreating the uncertainty and lack of peace in Michael’s life. Whether or not that was the author’s intention, this style choice definitely heightened the reading experience for me.

My Name is Michael is an important new novel that should be read by government officials, social activists and individuals who have concerns for children in any part of the world. As the character in the book known only as “The American” tells Michael when recording his life to that point, “When people read your story they will become outraged and speak out.” This is not a book that will make you feel good or that simply should be another check mark on your desired reading list. However, it is an expertly-written piece of fiction that is rooted in truths that will be, and should be, difficult to forget. My hope is that My Name is Michael becomes one important way in which information about the atrocity of child beggars is shared and action can be taken.

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The Misadventures of Sister Mary Olga Fortitude

Author: Davis Aujourd’hui

ISBN: 978-1-4327-3047-5

Publisher: OutskirtsPress.com (2009)

Genre: fiction, humor, social commentary

Pages: 155

Reviewer: Sarah Moore for WITS (01/2009)

When I reflect on the fictional nuns who have found their way into our collective consciousness through television and movies over the last fifty years, there seems to be the common thread of a dichotomous personality. These pious women are portrayed as kind-hearted servants of God and their communities, but also mischievous humans who are quite capable of less-than-holy behavior. Maria from The Sound of Music cared about those VonTrapp children, but she was known to be late to afternoon prayers. Sally Field was charming as The Flying Nun, but her unorthodox methods often had the Reverend Mother up in arms. And, of course, Whoopi Goldberg used her habit to hide from the mob during her turn as a nun in Sister Act. Davis Aujourd’hui adds another Sister to the roll call of memorable nuns in his new book The Misadventures of Sister Mary Olga Fortitude. With her alcohol-filled crucifix and Marlboro smoke signals sent straight to heaven as prayers, this sister will undoubtedly captivate your attention and have you turning the pages.

Sister Mary Olga speaks to the readers directly, with each of the chapters reading like the script from a classic radio broadcast. I doubt that many of the nun’s stories would have passed FCC scrutiny, however! She draws us in with opening remarks which immediately command our attention, like “T.L.I.A.M.G, my dears!” (the acronym standing for The Lord is a Mighty God) or “Now!” Then, she proceeds to share important lessons in Advanced Holiness using some of the residents of Bucksnort, Wisconsin, home of the Have a Heart convent, as the fodder for her tales. Readers of Sister Mary Olga Fortitude’s wise and unique perspective will quickly learn that no one is without a fascinating story to his or her name. Although you may never have discovered a body in the process of cremation as you tried to bake a cake or bore offspring who made inappropriate digestive noises while playing Baby Jesus in the annual Christmas pageant, I know that you will be able to relate to the flaws discussed by Sister Mary, albeit exaggerated, that are common to the human condition. Mr. Aujourd’hui’s inspired storytelling and fun use of words make each of these revelations all the more memorable.

Even while creating a hilarious cast of characters and series of events in which they are players, Aujourd’hui presents his readers with a serious commentary on the importance of tolerance and refraining from judgment. Through Sister Mary Olga Fortitude, he introduces us to people who are often considered outcasts in traditionally accepted society, from transgendered nuns and prostitutes to gay cowboys and morbidly obese women. While sharing their stories and secrets, Sister reminds us not to be critical of the unusual personalities we meet as the book unfolds. And, as reinforcement, she repeatedly confesses to her own shortcomings in terms of lust, gossip, and alcohol. The Misadventures of Sister Mary Olga Fortitude is a laugh-out-loud interpretation of the Golden Rule.

To further the point of the dangers to be found in judgment and narrow-mindedness, Aujourd’hui creates a group of women who are known as the Bunheads United Now organization (BUN). These ladies are known for their tight pulled-back hairstyle, which Sister Mary Olga points out is a hindrance to unimpeded brain functions. They are critical of anyone who does not fit the acceptable mold of behavior and they create superficial, seemingly perfect demeanors to hide their most personal doubts and insecurities. The leader of the BUN brigade, appropriately named Priscilla Bunhead, ends up on the receiving end of some vengeful scissors. Readers who have felt judged for their lifestyle or decisions will likely take some satisfaction out of this particularly amusing moment in the book.

The Misadventures of Sister Mary Olga Fortitude is a new release by Davis Aujourd’hui that presents a sharp and irreverent look at humanity. Offered through the lens of an unforgettable nun who knows everybody’s business but refrains from placing judgments (well, most of the time!), this novel is wonderful in its personality development and colorful language. And, as is promised on the book jacket, I am thrilled that more “misadventures” await those who quickly will become loyal readers. I have no doubt that Sister Mary Olga Fortitude has many more secrets to share and life lessons to teach, and I plan to be sitting in the front row.

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Tuey’s Course

Author: James Ross

ISBN: 978-1-4363-8994-5

Publisher: Xlibris 2008

Genre: fiction, human drama, race relations

Pages: 286

Reviewer: Sarah Moore for WITS (01/2009)

I always enjoy the opportunity to review more than one work by the same author. I am able to see the evolution of his writing as well as develop a better sense of what he is trying to accomplish through the sharing of his stories and characters. Tuey’s Course is the third book by author James Ross, with his previous publications, Lifetime Loser and Finish Line on the bookshelves last year and earlier this year, respectively. The Prairie Winds Golf Course serves as the consistent backdrop for all three novels, but each book takes its readers on a completely unique journey. In his first book, Ross unveiled a captivating story of crime and shady business dealings. Next, he shared the coming-of-age of two teenage boys who learn important life lessons from their ailing mentor. Now, in Tuey’s Course, Ross challenges us in his brutally honest portrayal of race, class and political power structures. Those who have enjoyed Ross’ attention to creating rich detail and fascinating characters in his previous works, as well as readers who are discovering Ross for the first time with Tuey’s Course, will not be disappointed in this new release that makes you think and may even make you angry.

Tuey’s Course focuses on WeWildapheet Ulisees O’Tweety (known as Tuey) and his struggles to make an honest living while fighting the corrupt elected officials in his town who seem determined to thwart his efforts at every turn. Tuey diligently attends every council meeting and sometimes uses unusual methods to convey his frustration with the city’s establishment. In sharing the details of Tuey’s life and his standing on the socioeconomic ladder, Ross makes a bigger statement about the impact that race and money has on the voice a person enjoys in our society. And, he shows that the desperation eventually reached by the poor and the overlooked can lead to tragic results. Ross continues his practice of interweaving multiple plot lines by including a referee who throws football games in return for a payout, a gay priest who flies to Vegas for the weekend with his lover at the expense of a crooked banker, and a developer who is willing to commit crimes in order to get the land that he desires. All of these characters, as well as the golf course regulars we have come to know in Ross’ previous books, come into contact with Tuey to create a novel that manages to be both layered and cohesive in its storylines.

As was the case in Finish Line, Ross employs racial stereotypes when writing the dialect and creating the background stories of his characters. Tuey speaks with the vernacular of an African-American in a way that may have been more common during the period in which Ross’ distant relative, Mark Twain, was sharing his candid views on American society. The ethnic neighborhoods described by Ross are blatant in their names, as the Asian residents live in Little Chang Hai and the Arabs live in an area called the Sand Dunes. The popular rapper has a ridiculous name, the Asian investor is short and shifty, and the always-drunk pilot and a couple of his cohorts at the golf course have no hesitation in using derogatory slurs. Every ethnic label is exposed and exaggerated in Tuey’s Course. Upon my initial reading, I will admit that the language made me uncomfortable. I was concerned that, by taking this writing style to extremes, Ross was simply perpetuating unfair racial views that still exist in our country. Upon further reflection and after reading the conclusion of the book; however, I realize that Ross’ intention was to evoke emotion from his reading audience. Tuey’s Course is not a light read meant for casual summertime reading at the beach. You will be forced to examine your own reaction to the character portrayals and think about where our society places different groups of people.

James Ross succeeds in creating yet another thoughtful and detailed book in Tuey’s Course. He provides an important and unique voice to the works of fiction that are making statements as to who we are as people. I believe that readers likely will have varying reactions to the characters in Tuey’s Course, which will make for great conversation. And, it appears that Ross is not done with his writing endeavors. A serial killer who makes random appearances through news reports in both Finish Line and Tuey’s Course is still a mystery. Is this a teaser from Ross, or just a secondary plot to throw us off-track? Time will tell. For now, I recommend that you grab a copy of Tuey’s Course and prepare to react!

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Saffron Dreams

Shaila Abdullah

Modern History Press (2009)

ISBN 9781932690736

Reviewed by Olivera Baumgartner-Jackson for Reader Views (01/09)

Arissa Illahi, a Pakistani woman living in New York, has it all - a loving husband, the freedom to pursue the work she enjoys, good friends, understanding family and a child on the way. Then one fateful morning her life shatters – the World Trade Center in NYC collapses in a terrorist attack, and takes with it Faizan, Arissa’s husband. Arissa’s world will never be the same. Not only has she lost her soulmate, her beloved husband and the father of the unborn child, but she suddenly finds herself in a world where she is perceived as an enemy just for being a Muslim.

There are books that are beautiful simply because they are so positive and pleasant. And there are those that manage to be beautiful in spite of the pain and the suffering and the heartbreak contained within. Shaila Abdullah’s Saffron Dreams is both. Her writing is mesmerizing. On one hand it feels like a classically cut diamond – precise, sparkling, blindingly beautiful, but also incredibly sharp. On the other hand her writing reminds me of a dish I’ve often had traveling in India – a thali. Yes, I am very well aware of the fact that the author is Pakistani and not Indian, but many of the foods she mentioned in the book reminded me a lot of India, and that is probably why I thought of thali. Thali is usually a round metal tray with many compartments, each containing a different item, such as rice, dhal, different vegetables and curries, chutney, yoghurt and something sweet to finish. Each of those items complements or contrasts the others to perfection, and together they are some of the best food I’ve ever tasted. This is the way I feel about Saffron Dreams. It was comforting, it was funny, it was spicy; and then heartbreaking, full of despair, filled with hope, amazingly fresh and vibrant and satisfying. Following Arissa’s story makes the reader realize how little most of us know and understand the world of Muslims, and how incredibly wrong so many of our perceptions are.

If you are looking for a tender love story, you’ll find it here. If you are curious about how people live, love and laugh in another culture, you are in for a treat. If you want to read about overcoming challenges, your wish will be granted. If it is simply beauty that you are searching for, you’ll find it in abundance in Saffron Dreams by Shaila Abdullah. This is a book I would highly recommend to anybody who loves beautifully written and intelligent contemporary prose, especially to the readers who are curious and open minded, and to those who enjoy stories with strong female characters.

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Taking the Sea: Perilous Waters, Sunken Ships, and the True Story of the Legendary Wrecker Captains

Dennis M. Powers

AMACOM

ISBN 9780814413531

Reviewed by Richard R. Blake for Reader Views (12/08)

Taking the Sea is the fourth in Dennis M. Powers’ celebrated maritime narratives. Research on his book Sentinel of the Seas triggered Powers’ curiosity about the ships used during the building of the St. George Reef Lighthouse, and about the colorful Captain Thomas P. H. Whitelaw and other master wreckers. The book describes an era when shipping was the dominant form of transportation throughout the world. Powers writes about the courage, achievement, risks and the challenges these men faced.

Powers delved into the records of maritime museums, libraries, newspapers, and magazine articles to bring together the facts for the stories for this project. He supplemented this information with interviews and genealogical records.

The account begins in 1863 when, as a sixteen-year-old seaman, Tom Whitelaw, arrived in San Francisco. The book covers his career of over sixty years. Powers documents detailed descriptions of Whitelaw’s most memorable salvaging projects, including: The Rosecrans, the Respigerdo, the Umatilla, the Dumbarton, and the Blaimore.

Tom’s grandson Ken shared intimate insights into the family life of his grandparents and of his personal career with Whitelaw & Company.

Articles in the Literary Digest, American Magazine, Popular Mechanics, and Sunset Magazine all have featured various aspects of Whitelaw’s story. His divers made 17,000 dives while Whitelaw’s salvage operations saved over 289 ships.

In addition to Thomas P. H. Whitelaw, Powers includes stories of other colorful divers and wreckers, like Dynamite Johnny, Martin Lund, T. A. Scott, William E. Chapman, and Israel J. Merritt. He tells of wrecking and salvaging phenomenon’s from the Bering Sea and the coast of Alaska, up and down the western coastline of Canada and United Sates and on the East Coast from Canada to the waters of the Florida Keys, and the islands of the Bahamas. I especially enjoyed the story of a ghost ship, the City of Columbus.

Detailed background on Maritime Law and its evolution include specific judgments, appeals, and settlements between, Ship Owners, Insurance Companies, and the Wreckers.

An amazing collection of photographs dramatically reinforce Powers’ narrative. The scope of his selected bibliography gives evidence of the background reading and specific research that has gone into the preparation of this book and which so deftly qualify Powers to compile this chronicle.

Powers’ writing is imaginative, informative, and motivational. He is a gifted story teller. His descriptions are strong and powerful. He paints word pictures of wave explosions, ferocious storm conditions, and the devastating loss of lives. I could almost feel the tension of the octopus gripping my leg, squeezing my arm, and throttling my throat in an underwater wrestling match.

Taking the Sea by Dennis M. Powers will be enjoyed by anyone understanding the call of the deep, lured by maritime adventure, and tales of an almost forgotten era in history when Spanish galleons, steam schooners, and tall-masted sailing ships gave fortitude to commerce and industry.

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How to Make Colleges Want You Insider Secrets for tipping the Admission odds in your Favor

Author: Mike Moyer

ISBN: 978-14022-1367-0

Pages: 152 $12.95 Soft Cover

Published by Sourcebooks, Inc. (2008) Non-Fiction

Whether you are a freshman or a senior in high school, this book is an eye-opener for you! Mike Moyer tells you the way to dramatically increase your chances of getting into the college of your choice. In How to Make Colleges Want You, he provides fresh approaches to getting your college application out of the maybe or no stacks, to the yes we want you stack. The book also contains references to Mike’s Web site: http://www.collegepeas.com/ where additional information and additions to the chapters are contained.

Mike tells you what he did to get accepted to the college of his choice by describing his unusual activity of raising homing pigeons while in high school. He took a homing pigeon to his first interview with the admissions counselor and sent a message to himself from the counselor! This NTA (non-teenage activity) got him recognized as special.

Getting into a competitive college requires a lot more than grades or regular school activities; it is a question of planning. Moyer makes suggestions to accomplish the goal of getting into a prestigious college with his inside secrets. A few are, attending a community college for a year or two to obtain better grades, transfer in to fill one of the vacancies left by someone who has moved on, and start in mid-year instead of competing with the freshman entry class.

Consider there are 43,000 high schools and an equal number of valedictorians who apply to highly competitive colleges. Their applications are your competition for admission to these colleges and even with good grades, you still are not in their strata. The techniques in this book are designed to raise your chances for admission by 10 to 20 per cent. When you apply Mike’s ideas during your high school years, the odds are even better.

Mike Moyer is unique, as he not only provides this fairly inexpensive blue print for success, he lectures at high schools giving students a great heads-up on obtaining admission to choice schools. He has a highly informative lecture on CD which is available at his Web site: http://www.collegepeas.com/. As a bonus, Mike offers a 25% discount to readers of this column who want to learn more. Enter the code “CLARK” for the discount.

Author P.J. Thomas Will Join the Podcast on Friday

The podcast takes a serious turn on Friday, February 20 as P. J. Thomas discusses his new book My Name is Michael. Mr. Thomas spent two years in China absorbing the culture and learning as much as possible from its people. Along the way, he discovered the horrible practice of children being abducted, disfigured, and then forced to beg in the streets. He decided to create the fictional story of My Name is Michael to shed light on a very real problem.


Mr. Thomas' interview with Writers in the Sky will focus on how he gathered the material for this novel and the risks he took in doing so. Listeners also will have the opportunity to learn more about the characters who were based on real interactions experienced by the author, the process he uses to share this story in the most effective manner possible, and Thomas' suggestions for how readers of My Name is Michael can take action if they are moved by the content of his book.

My Name is Michael is a very powerful novel and Friday's interview promises more of the same.

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Friday 13th Gift of Poetry from WITS!

It's Friday, the 13th and Writers in the Sky Creative Writing Services has published a special issue of poetry as a token of our appreciation for those who subscribe to our newsletter.

We have compiled an e-book filled with poems written and submitted by our readers and made a very nice e-book that we think you will enjoy. Feel free to share it with others!

You may download the chapbook as a PDF from our Web site.

Graphic design (cover and interior layout) was provided by Jessica Dockter. Please let her know how much you appreciate her generosity by visiting her Web site to view the lovely samples http://leedesign.org

For more information about WITS and this chapbook, please visit us online.

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Dodi Elhalogy on Writers in the Sky Today!

Author of New Cookbook Featuring Middle Eastern Recipes to Discuss the Lessons Concerning Culture and Health to Be Found Within Its Pages

Sarah Moore, author's assistant for Writers in the Sky, will be interviewing Dodi Elhalogy today about The Savory Secrets of Dodi's Home Cooking. Mrs. Elhalogy was raised on an estate in an Egyptian village. Since her father was mayor of the province, many important social events were held in their home. By helping her mothers and sisters prepare for these functions, Mrs. Elhalogy mastered the art of Middle Eastern cooking and the important role it plays in Middle Eastern homes and gatherings. In today's interview, Mrs. Elhalogy discusses the health benefits of the ingredients used in her cooking and what readers can learn about Middle Eastern culture from studying her book.

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To learn more about Mrs. Elhalogy and her new book, please visit her page at Outskirts Press. Listeners may purchase The Savory Secrets of Dodi's Home Cooking here.

French Letters Virginia's War: Tierra Texas 1944

Today we welcome Jack Woodville London to our writing blog. He is discussing the first book in his trilogy, French Letters -- Virginia’s War: Tierra Texas 1944.

YVONNE: Tell me something about yourself and your writing background.
JACK LONDON: I began writing and editing articles for the International Law Journal in 1970 and over the next thirty-five years wrote a large number of articles on evidence, aviation law, and procedure. I also wrote rules of evidence and uniform jury instructions for the bar. About ten years ago, I began writing short stories for family and friends.

I come from a literary family. My mother wrote a play in her sixties. My aunt was president of Pen Women. And then there was that guy in California who wrote about Alaska, the gold rush, dog stories. He died almost 100 years ago.

YVONNE: What is the title of your book? Give us the basic story line so we’ll know what it’s about.
JACK: French Letters: Virginia’s War is the story of Virginia Sullivan, a lonely young woman in a small town in 1944 who had to decide whether to tell her soldier she would wait for him, then discovered a bit long after he was gone that she is pregnant. Her father runs the town. He and the town are happily oblivious to her dilemma, living the war in tarnished patriotism by counterfeiting ration coupons, hiding things from the government war production buyers, and gossiping about one another.


YVONNE: What inspired you to write this book?
JACK: I am a historian by training and am fascinated by the part of war that falls on the public, all apart from the dates of battles and names of generals. Go to any military base today and you’ll see widows, moms waiting for their men to come back from Iraq or Afghanistan, and children who never knew their dads. World War II is a story of V-mails, the form of letters used to correspond between home and the war front, and Dear John letters, the form used to stick a dagger in some poor soldier’s heart. A lot of V-mails with Dear John letters in them sank during naval battles and more than one unknowing soldier came home in 1945 to find babies that weren’t there when he left. The role of doctors completely changed in World War II; penicillin, sulfa, and boiled water changed infant mortality rates all over the world. The second book of the series is about Virginia’s absent soldier, a doctor sent to France, who comes home to find a child who wasn’t there when he left for the war. And I love double entendres and word-play. How many people know the old-time meaning of ‘French letters?’


YVONNE: Is this the first book you have written?
JACK: It is the first published. Before this, I wrote a 400,000-word courtroom novel.

YVONNE: How long did it take to write this book? Any interesting tidbits about your writing method or how the book developed?
JACK: I wrote five drafts of Virginia’s War over a two year period, then stopped to do a first rough draft of Will’s Peace (tentative title of the second novel). It was essential that the two stories mesh. Virginia’s War and Will’s Peace take place at the same time, 1944-1945, with letters and events shared by a couple who are from a small Texas town. The events, dates, unit numbers, people mentioned in letters--all those had to agree without giving away either story. Once I finished the rough of Will’s Peace I was able to go back to Virginia’s War and finish it in only two more drafts, hundreds of revisions, and one more year--no time at all, really (smiling).


YVONNE: How did you publish your book? Tell me about your publishing experience and what you learned from it.
JACK: Pathway published a book titled Every Town Needs a Trail and I am in the book. Mike Kearby, an author of historic fiction of the American West, encouraged me to seek a small independent publisher with a first rate team. Pathway created the Vire Press division to give me a chance. Mike directed Vire to Mindy Reed and Stephanie Barko and they shepherded Vire, me, and Pathway to the conclusion. I have learned that they are the publishers and I am the writer.


YVONNE: Where is your book available? Do you have a Web site or blog where we can learn more about you or your book?
JACK: It is available through the Vire Press website, www.virepress.com and is distributed by Pathway Books which has it listed with the major distribution catalogs. It is now available on Amazon.

And I do have a blog, www.frenchlettersthenovel.blogspot.com. I invite your readers to visit and comment about the books and about the World War II experiences of their family and friends.

YVONNE: As far as marketing, do you do more online publicity or print/radio/TV promotion? Tell me some ways you have promoted your book. Give examples and links to any sites you feel might help other authors.
JACK: I write and when my publicist, Stephanie Barko, arranges or coordinates something, I do what she tells me. As far as promotion, the book launch is at BookPeople in Austin, Texas on February 13 (make someone happy for Valentine’s Day with French Letters). One of my editor Mindy Reed’s brilliant pieces of advice was to have early readers fill out a blinded questionnaire so that they could give feedback on the book. Those early readers were wildly enthusiastic, not only about the story but also the historical accuracy, such as the correct color of ration stamps and the military draft notices posted on post office bulletin boards. Those early readers and blurb writers have publicized the book by word of mouth. Oh, and the Groom News, my hometown paper, circulation 250 (smiling again).


YVONNE: Have you hired a publicist to help promote this book? If so, what was your experience like?
JACK: Stephanie Barko has done a great job. She lined up some perfect candidates for blurbs and, as a result, the book has jacket endorsement blurbs from Jim Parkel, past president of AARP, from Canadian Playwright Leeann Minogue, from Mike Kearby, from two retired history professors, and from four elected officials. She has arranged interviews and book reviews and has a very good relationship with papers, print, and broadcast media. She has a great talent for identifying the readers who would be interested in French Letters and the right publications to query for reviews.

YVONNE: Any other comment you would like to share?
JACK: As we age, we think we are becoming our parents. French Letters reminds us that before our parents became our parents, they were us--young, uncertain, a bit out of control, and trying to get by in a difficult world. No one who has read the book thinks Virginia Sullivan was their mother, but they do think the book describes someone their mother told them about (and someone their father said he wanted to tell them about, but didn’t).

YVONNE: Thank you for giving us the opportunity to get to know you and learn about your book. I wish you well in your journey as an author.
JACK: Thank you for the visit, Yvonne.

Purchase French Letters on www.amazon.com.

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Friday's Podcast Interview to Feature Middle Eastern Cookbook

Our next Writers in the Sky Podcast interview will be conducted by Sarah Moore, our author's assistance, on Friday, February 13. Sarah's discussion will be with Dodi Elhalogy, who will be sharing information about her book The Secrets of Dodi’s Home Cooking.


Mrs. Elhalogy was raised on an estate in a small Egyptian village. Since her father was mayor of the province, many important social events were held in their home. By helping her mothers and sisters prepare for these functions, Mrs. Elhalogy mastered the art of Middle Eastern cooking and the important role it plays in Middle Eastern homes and gatherings. Mrs. Elhalogy now lives in California and plans to open a restaurant that features the recipes of The Secrets of Dodi's Home Cooking and others like them.

During the interview with Sarah Moore, Mrs. Elhalogy will share more about how her family background prepared her for this book, the health benefits of the recipes she included, and how the book is formatted to include cultural and culinary details.

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The Savory Secrets of Dodi’s Home Cooking
Author: Howida (Dodi) Elhalogy
ISBN: 978-1-4327-2557-0
Publisher: Outskirts Press, Inc.
Genre and Target Market: cooking, food, culture
Publication Date: 2008
Book Length in Pages: 84
Reviewer: Sarah Moore for WITS (01/2009)

I always take a little time to skim through cookbooks while at my local bookstore. I like discovering new ingredients, or perhaps just new ways to use already familiar ingredients. I enjoy taking a moment to envision the great dinner parties I will host and the compliments I will receive on the unique and delicious menu I prepared. Above all, I love to stare at the beautiful pictures of the final product as created by the author. While my limited culinary skills may never allow for an exact visual replica of the dish as it’s intended, the colorful presentations provide something to which I can aspire. The new cookbook The Savory Secrets of Dodi’s Home Cooking by Howida “Dodi” Elhalogy exceeds all of my prerequisites for a great addition to anyone’s kitchen collection.

Mrs. Elhalogy grew up in an Egyptian village as the daughter of the province’s mayor. Since her family did a lot of entertaining on their large estate, Mrs. Elhalogy learned at a young age to prepare meals for special events and eventually mastered the art of Middle Eastern cooking. She decided to pull together her family’s recipes into this beautiful cookbook as a way of preserving a cultural tradition and of introducing a new audience to the amazing flavors and textures found in the dishes of the Middle East.

I was first struck by the beauty of the book. Mrs. Elhalogy uses rich colors of yellow and orange on the cover, along with a photo of garlic, onion and cilantro (I’m already sold … you cannot do better than those ingredients for a great-smelling kitchen!) to draw her readers into the culinary treasures inside. Once I turned the pages, I found page after page of beautiful pictures highlighting the table presentations that can be created with her recipes. When necessary, there were even “action photos” showing how to proceed correctly with certain steps in the recipe. I am a cook who hesitates to try a new recipe unless I can see the intended end product, so the pictures that accompanied each recipe were much appreciated.

The recipes themselves provided explicit step-by-step instructions. I have tried to work from other cookbooks that take certain steps in the process for granted, inevitably leading me to make a critical error. Not so with the recipes written by Dodi. The recipes develop methodically from the initial washing of ingredients to the necessary garnishes. I feel confident that, even though I would be working with some food that is unfamiliar to me, Dodi has provided enough instruction to ensure my success. And, just in case aspiring cooks of Middle Eastern cuisine still have some concern when working through her recipes, Dodi includes a glossary of some of the more unusual ingredients, along with their alternate names and descriptions. This component of the Helpful Hints section, along with the recipes’ Arabic translations on each page, provide an opportunity to learn about the individual foods while you are bringing them together for a meal.

As I read through each recipe, I was struck by an even greater opportunity that this book provides than just creating amazing food. A primary way of learning about a culture is through its traditional foods. I think back to “Culture Days” as a young child at school, when we would bring in a meal from the country of our choice. Learning about food opens the doors to other conversations, and this truth continues into adulthood. Why is a particular ingredient a staple of the diet in certain cultures? What are the most common cooking methods and why are they used? What are the standard customs practiced when eating a meal? I believe that by discussing these questions and other topics that may evolve from the conversation, we can gain greater appreciation and understanding for individuals from around the world. The recipes in The Savory Secrets of Dodi’s Home Cooking provide an excellent catalyst for just this purpose.

My husband and I have long considered Middle Eastern cuisine to be among our favorites. I already have tried several of the recipes, including the Tabula Salad and Koshary, to rave reviews around my dinner table. I look forward to wearing out the pages of The Savory Secrets of Dodi’s Home Cooking as I teach my own children the great Egyptian traditions that Dodi learned in her own youth and now, thankfully, shares with all of us. For those who are interested in expanding their culinary horizons, or perhaps simply want to enjoy the beauty of a well-planned cookbook, this offering by Howida “Dodi” Elhalogy is a must-have addition to your home library.

Carolyn Howard-Johnson’s Special Valentine offer

From now until February 18, 2009 (to allow time for the perennially late lover! you may give the gift of poetry for Valentine's Day. Carolyn is offering Cherished Pulse as a free .pdf download. You can give it to a loved one or offer it to your Web site visitors at no charge.

It may be printed into a booklet—on linen, in color! Tie on a satin bookmark and voila! A Valentine unlike any you've ever given before, I bet! Read more about it on www.howtodoitfrugally.com, or download here: http://www.compulsivereader.com/html/images/Cherished Pulse.pdf

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Irene Brodsky Discusses Her New Book of Poetry

Join Sarah Moore, author’s assistant for Writers in the Sky, as she interviews Irene Brodsky about her new book Poetry Unplugged.

Ms. Brodsky is a recent 62-year-old graduate of Brooklyn College and Poetry Unplugged is her first book of poetry. She was first prompted to express herself through poetry following the tragic events of September 11th. Following her own education in Philosophy and English, she has returned to the classroom to share her craft with new students.

In her first collection of work, titled Poetry Unplugged, she shares freestyle poetry that reflects on childhood experiences, everyday observations, and her life in Brooklyn.

Click here to listen to Part 1...

As Ms. Brodsky shares on the back of cover of the book, “Just step inside to find something for everyone!” Listeners will learn about the inspiration behind Brodsky’s poetry, her method for writing, and reasons that she chose to return to school and pursue writing at this stage in her life. She hopes to serve as an inspiration to other women who will treat their own age as just a number and encourage them to pursue their own dreams.

Click here to listen to Part 2...

For more information about Poetry Unplugged and Ms. Brodsky, please visit www.OutskirtsPress.com

Patriot Acts by Steven Clark Bradley

Steven Clark Bradley’s writing reminds me of a script for the TV show 24. You might enjoy reading his latest book Patriot Acts. Here is a summary.

Today, America faces enemies that make the world of the Cold War seem like much brighter times. Islamic forces have declared Jihad on America causing the greatest threat to the life of the United States since World War II. In Patriot Acts, America finds itself under covert nuclear attack from the Islamic Republic of Iran which has linked up with radical American Militia groups. They have set aside their political and religious differences to carry out the widest attack to America in the nation's history. Colonel Fisher Harrison, the best trained Special Ops killer the military has, is the only one person who can effectively retaliate against their aggression. The only problem is that Colonel Fisher is in a federal prison, framed for a murder he did not commit by his former boss who is now the President of the United States of America. Take an amazing journey from Alaska to the Midwest and to the center of the Islamic Republic of Iran as two enemies unite to save the nation from two adversaries in league to bring the country to its knees. You will be amazed how close to home and to reality Patriot Acts could be!

Patriot Acts was published by Cambridge Books -- a subsidiary of Write Words, Inc. is dedicated to providing quality reading in both electronic and paper formats. They published more than 40 paperback books last year, and more than 65 electronic books.

"We are proud to have published Steven Clark Bradley's book, especially in these times." said Arline Chase, his publisher. "Today, it is more important than ever for Americas to be aware of the dangers our country faces. Yes, this book is fictional. But, its premise is certainly a plausible one."

Steven Clark Bradley's Patriot Acts

http://stevenclarkbradleyspatriotacts.blogspot.com/

Authors Corner February 2009

Welcome to the month of lovers—literary lovers that is! Readers and writers will find this month’s issue filled with ideas, places to contribute, and inspiring information.

Instead of thinking of Friday the thirteenth as an ominous day, think of it as a day to do something different—like read poetry! WITS is creating a special poetry issue to publish on Friday, February 13. If you would like to send a poem with your name, short bio, and a link to your blog or Web site, please get it to me before February 6 using WITS contact page.

The conversation I had with editor Carolyn Howard-Johnson was fabulous! We recorded our candid chat about editing books, querying publishers, and some of the common mistakes writers make and how to correct them. We also answered questions our readers sent us. If you missed your chance to eavesdrop on us, you can listen to this conversation with editors now. If reading is more your style than listening, you may read a partial transcript of the highlights of our conversation.

The WITS mentoring program is going strong. So far, we have learned how to write a media release, write a strong resource box, explored article marketing, and some handy dandy Microsoft Word features and keyboard shortcuts such as this one:

Pressing Ctrl+F together will open a box that allows you to type in the word or exact phrase you are looking for. Click OK and Word will start from the point in your document where your cursor is located and find the next word or phrase that is exactly as you typed in the search. To replace that word or word phrase, click the “replace” tab at the top of the search box and type in the word or phrase you want to substitute. Word will replace one at a time so you may review each change or you may opt to have Word replace all of the occurrences at the same time.

If you missed the deadline to sign up for our newbie class, you may want to speak with me about one-on-one mentoring sessions. You get the same lessons and assignments as the Tuesday group, but more individualized focus on a day other. Learn more at http://writersinthesky.com/mentoring.html.

As you know, we have three grandbabies on the way. So far, we have learned that Katie and Sareya are having boys. Amanda is scheduled to have her sonogram this month. We’ll soon know if the boy to girl ratio is 2:1 or 3:0. Thankfully, things are progressing well for all three of our daughters and the wee-ones in the wombs.

Friday the 13th is Poetry Day on WITS

Instead of thinking of Friday the 13 as an ominous day, think of it as a day to do something different—like read poetry! 

WITS is creating a special poetry issue to publish Friday, February 13. If you would like to send your own original poem with your name, short bio, and a link to your blog or Web site, please get it to Yvonne Perry before February 6 using WITS contact page. 

Poet Irene Brodsky to Discuss New Collection on Friday

On Friday, February 6, Writers in the Sky author's assistant Sarah Moore will be interviewing Irene Brodsky about her new book of freestyle poetry titled Poetry Unplugged.

Ms. Brodsky first developed her passion for writing poetry following the tragic events of September 11. Living in New York, she took pen to paper to share their grief concerning her friends who were in the towers. This poem, "The Tallest Twins," became the opening piece in Poetry Unplugged. In this collection, she shares a great selection of poetry that reflects on childhood experiences, everyday observations, and her lifetime spent in Brooklyn.


As Ms. Brodsky shares on the back of cover of the book, “Just step inside to find something for everyone!” The same holds true for this week's discussion! Listeners to this podcast interview will learn about the inspiration behind Brodsky’s poetry, her decision to return to school at the age of fifty-five to earn her college degree, and why she has now decided to enter the classroom once again to teach her newly learned craft.

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Poetry Unplugged
Author: Irene Brodsky
ISBN: 978-1-4327-3650-7
Publisher: OutskirtsPress.com (2009)
Genre and Target Market: poetry; women; education
Pages: 55
Reviewer: Sarah Moore for WITS (01/2009)

I am always eager to discover the expression that is shared by an artist through a chosen craft. Whether he is a composer who brought notes together to form a symphony centuries ago or a young poet who thoughtfully constructs her word patterns even before she knows how to tie her shoes, I love to get lost in such honest emotion. As a musician and a writer, I know that any moment or any object can inspire an outpouring of self. I have recently found a new poet named Irene Brodsky who shares much of her personal story in her just published collection of freestyle poetry entitled Poetry Unplugged. I have not had the pleasure of meeting Ms. Brodsky and have only had the opportunity for one phone conversation, but I feel that I have some sense of her background and what she holds so dear through her wonderful use of words.

Irene Brodsky, like most Americans across the country, felt a powerful need to express herself after the tragedy of September 11. As a resident of New York City, she had a front-seat perspective on that horrible day and found herself drawn to poetry has her chosen means of releasing her overwhelming emotions. She wrote a compelling piece of poetry entitled “The Tallest Twins” in which she portrays the World Trade towers as her close friends. This personification served as a less painful way of coping with the grief she was experiencing for her friends who worked in those buildings. The poem became the opening selection in Poetry Unplugged and serves as an appropriate and compelling introduction to the rest of her work.

Throughout the poems found in Brodsky’s Poetry Unplugged, one clear characteristic of the author becomes pleasantly apparent. She is a woman who does not have to search to find points of beauty and astonishment in her everyday surroundings, and she never takes this precious realization for granted. There are several poems that recall childhood memories from places like Howard Street or Prospect Park in Brooklyn. Her words in these selections create a nostalgic visual of a New York that, for the most part, exists only in the memory of those who lived through the era. What wonderful pieces these will be for her readers who look back at their own childhoods in New York with fondness. Ms. Brodsky also shows a love for the natural environment, with poems detailing her day spent with a doe, vacations to the Catskill Mountains, and even the simple appreciation for the beautiful color of an apple. When someone’s writing encourages me to take a second look at the ordinary grandeur that surrounds me, I am truly thankful.

Ms. Brodsky’s work also should serve as a source of encouragement for women who are considering a significant change in their life’s path. She chose to return to college at the age of fifty-five and earned her Bachelor of Arts degree in Philosophy. There are several poems in Poetry Unplugged that share Ms. Brodsky’s sense of pride at this great accomplishment. Her poem “Graduation Day” encapsulates all of the strong emotions that anyone feels when achieving one of their life goals, from a sense of disbelief to new confidence to just a bit of sadness at saying goodbye to friends. I felt a particular connection to “Spring Has Sprung on the Quad,” with lines such as “Pictures have been taken, The Quad is all aflutter, A special day awaits!” I read this poem several times, and recalled wonderful visuals of my own graduation nearly fifteen years ago. Perhaps some of Ms. Brodsky’s readers will be inspired to create such memories for themselves!

I sat down with Irene Brodsky’s Poetry Unplugged as someone who has great appreciation for the written word, but hardly as a seasoned critic of poetry. I closed the collection of work as a fan of Ms. Brodsky’s use of language and the confident sense of self that gives her poetry both an inviting approach and a real sense of purpose. Her personal story, namely her decision to return to school later in life and now pass on her learned craft to new students, is a wonderful starting point to attract readers before even enjoying her first line of poetry. When readers discover that the quality of her art is such that they want to reread her words to themselves and others, they will hope that another book of poetry is in Ms. Brodsky’s future. Whether or not such a publication is forthcoming, I at least would love to grab a seat in her class one day and experience the contagious excitement she feels for poetry and simply for life.