- Point of view shifts without clear sense of who is telling the story
- Lack of transition from one scene or character to another
- Formatting dialog
- Balance of dialog and action/exposition/internal thought
- Telling rather than showing what the character is thinking
A book published by a major publishing house has gone through developmental editing, copy editing, and rounds of proofreading before it comes to the market. This ensures the book will be an enjoyable read. Self-publishers and authors who use subsidy publishers to bring their book to market don't always have an editor work with them. Yet, editing is just as important as writing a good story because it makes a book worthy of the reader's time.
LJ gives the best explanation on why a writer cannot edit his or her own work. Most authors are truly surprised by how much more work a manuscript needs. They are shocked and even appalled by all the red lines on marked up copy when it comes back from the editor.
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